Transformation
Morning,
afternoon, sun rises and sets
The
light peeks through the trees
A
time for quiet as I reminisce on regrets
The
breeze puts me at ease.
A
time of day when imagination runs wild
The
music sings in my ears.
Filled
with the admiration of a child
My
voice echoes as if I have no fears
Abruptly
one morning the world becomes white
The
spring trees are in full bloom
From
dark winter comes glorious light
Better
times are ahead, I assume
In
a few days, nature transforms again.
The
streets are lined with purple and green.
Some
say beauty brings rain,
But
in my eyes, the warmth is serene.
Each
day, my fantasies take me away
The
weight of reality, lifted
At
the end of the ride, I pray
I
may return to the focus from which I drifted.
From
our allies we tend to hear lies.
Others
pass, though our eyes do not meet
I
cannot see the ideas that rise in their skies.
The
potential is left incomplete.
The
road bends, and I slow around the curve
I,
too, turn over new leaf.
What
I earn, I will deserve.
I’ll
hold to what I believe.
My poem “Transformation,” is modeled
after the writing style of Percy Bysshe Shelley. I used some of the same themes
as Shelley such as the beauty of nature and the power of the human mind. This
poem also includes the same rhyme scheme found in many of Shelley’s works. The
scheme, ababcdcdefefghgh…, is shown
in poems like “Ozymandias” and “Mutability.” Percy Bysshe Shelley is also known
for using eye rhyme, or the use of words that look like they rhyme, but do not
actually sound similar. Shelley uses this in his poem, “On Death” when he
writes,
“The secret
things of the grave are there,
Where all but this frame must surely be,
Though the
fine-wrought eye and the wondrous ear.”
The words there
and ear look like they should rhyme,
but create different sounds. An example of eye rhyme in my poem is ‘rain’ and ‘again’. This
poem, as well as the many written by Percy Bysshe Shelley, utilizes
characteristics common in writing published during the Romantic Period. Some
obvious Romantic themes in “Transformation” include a strong sense of beauty of
the surround world and a vivid imagination.
Excellent imitation of Shelley's poetic style. You've described a changing landscape--a motif akin to Shelley's thoughts on the mutability, or changeability, of the natural world. I especially liked the following line:
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The rhythm of the line and the image it conjures are very nice. Your rationale for how your poem conforms to the conventions of Romantic poetry was also well articulated. Good job.